Alcohol (No More)

by John   Nov 16, 2008


I'm losing track of time
I'm losing what? My mind...
I check my pocket..not a dime.
I gotta go...What?...I gotta leave
Before this drink comes to take over me
I'm outta this door, don't fall on the floor.
Because when I let go, my stomach may go and heave.
Where are my keys?...No my car?...
Stumbling, crazy, fooled up out the bar.
Why is my vision blurred?..Stutter?...No Slur
Thought this drink would help my problems
Help me out and solve them.
But no, I'm still alone...driving towards my home
Dammit I lost my phone....But I hear a dial tone?
Got a ringing in my ear...What is this fear?
Ringing turns to screams...Am i sober?...No the Air..
The breeze feels cool....the strange feeling of a fool
There goes the dial tone again, it's ringing in my head...
I can't make it stop, why won't it end....
but wait that's not a ringing.....It sounds like a horn
Pulsing sounding louder...Wait lights? What's........
No More.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Jackie

    An excellent poem, your description was brilliant, 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by amandalynn

    Really excellent poem..
    5/5.

  • 15 years ago

    by Hollywood

    I liked this alot.
    I seen this happen to family members.
    I have even see this happen to me.
    I mean im not 21 but I used to use
    Alcohol to hide my pain
    and occasiounly I still do.
    But I loved it.
    Great Imagery
    Take care..
    5/5
    -Kortney

  • 15 years ago

    by Xx Shiny StarxX

    I love it is agreat poem

  • 15 years ago

    by ForeverASickKid

    Im speechless this poem was amazing