Dance of the Pharoes (Double Etheree contest)

by SashaMirage   Nov 27, 2008

She's thriving
In the dessert
Sun fades in the sky
She feels so alive now
Her body moves to the drum
She slowly becomes a mirage
Exaggerating flawless movements
They all believe to be impossible

Vibration seems to come from within her
Her body imitating a snake
Charming her audience with lust
Hypnotic are the circles
She is now creating
Hips tell a story


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  • 11 years ago

    by Faithless

    Ohh this poem is absolutely beautiful... the choice of words that you used strongly portrays what you had in mind.I love it;)

  • 11 years ago

    by Blissful

    I loved the imagery here! I could just imagine it all flawlessly in my head which made it that much more interesting to read. Great choice of words and you used this form beautifully. The flow was great and there isnt anything left to say but that I loved it.

    Well done.

    *5/5* :]

  • 11 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Well done Sasha this was a well thought out poem and well written, I know the form and you did a first class job .
    Well done


  • 11 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    Oh this was so nice. It reminds me of the poem with the same title that TJBecker wrote. How in tune you two are^_^
    I loved the form and the whole magic of the poem.

  • 11 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Well this poem was different. I liked it. The wording and flow was great. I gave this poem a 5/5. =)