Teddy Bear
by StandStill Nov 28, 2008
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I woke up one morning and realized you don't want me. You grew up awfully fast. I wish I had taken more time to love every little piece of you because now you're moving on faster and faster away from me. Pretty soon, you'll be a little speck of dust on a horizon in my memory. And that scares me, friend. You're supposed to need me. I'm your teddy bear. Remember when you got me for a Christmas present a year ago? I remember. I came out of the box and you clung to me. I was awake, then. That was when I feel like my life began. No moment before that. |
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14 years ago
by Gizmo
I loved this poem what else can be sad its a fantastic poem, its incredible sad but you can different meanings from that, the teddy bear can be a metaphor for falling out of love and wanting other things and thats what makes it so incredible emotional.
i know that you probally wrote the poem in this way to show that it is a thought a mind set for the teddy but forming it in a more structure basis may make it an easier read.
some of the lined the favoured the most where;
I didn't belong before I belonged to you
And I know my head's full of fluff, but I can tell
whoever not to be to critical about the poem the things in which i didn't like about apart from the structure where the dark basement its out of place i'd try teh closet under the stairs or something like that something which give sit a childhood theme and also i think it should be christmas years ago, so there would be more love and connection shown between the child and teddy.
however very good poem well done
