Fairytale Dream Come True

by X Harlea X   Dec 1, 2008


Sweet soft and tender lips touching mine
Feel so good together in a loving bind.
Over and over I ask if this is a dream
A fairytale dream that has finally come true.
Is it what we thought it would be
A fairytale dream come true?

You are so real
To me you are like something new; this I can deal.
Maybe this is a chance for new life
Maybe we are what both of us have been searching for right in our sight.
So this is just the beginning of what love can do
This is our faiytale dream come true.

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  • 15 years ago

    by kevin Boundy AKA the ghost

    Great write i love the flow and the emotion flowing from it 5/5 instantly =)

  • 15 years ago

    by Conrad

    A fairtale dream that has finally come true.
    Is it what we thought it would be
    A fairytale dream come true?

    I think that there is too much repitition using fairytale dream. also fairtale - to - fairytale

    Maybe we are what both of us have been searching for right in our sight.

    I would change this to something more dramatic, since this should be a powerful and bold part of the piece.

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