Life

by Daisy   Dec 12, 2008


Life is beautiful,
Never ending ray of sun,
Yet I admit,
Life is nowhere near fun.
Life is never-ending,
Screaming your head,
Sometimes you wish,
That you were dead.
Yet life is still pretty,
Filled with laughter and fun,
Life is beautiful,
Never-ending ray of sun.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Israel

    Love it! Perfectly worded

  • 15 years ago

    by Rohit Sapra

    Life is surely a learning experience which is worth experiencing so it is right to view life as a never-ending ray of sun. Nice poem.

  • 15 years ago

    by RoseBlood

    I must say that for a 11 year old you got pretty good view of life.
    You picture it in a little words, but you didn't miss a thing.
    great work.I admire it.
    5/5
    Carla

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Very nice. Begins with sadness then turns to joy. Good job.

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