Tripping Me Up

by Cara   Dec 16, 2008


With just one glance from you, my life feels complete
Every time you hold my hand, my heart skips a beat
I feel as though without you I would simply fall apart
This love we share is so special; its like a form of art

You are the best thing that has ever happened to me
Never leave my side baby, we are meant to be
Have I told you I love you? I love you more than you could ever know
So I am going to give you my heart, so never let me go

From the first time you spoke to me I knew this was true
I could tell your love for me, nothing could undo
You are like a little kid, tripping me up
Because baby I feel head over heels for you

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  • 16 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    Sweet action poetry. like an awsome movie you know. lol 5/5 in the book of great poetry.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Aw! so very sweet indeed!
    I am sure you melted his heart with this sweet dedication of love:)))

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    This si a great pice and you outdone your self in this
    it have been a long time since you writen ,it is really missed
    you chosen great adn simple words to say
    what you feel for your love and in what way

    you should be proud you write simple and clear
    and you was not shy , and from courage and not from fear
    bravo you outdone yourslef this time
    it is very gdo that you spoke up not like a mime

    great you deserver the five on this part
    and you shall get it by god from all my heart

    5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    Some of the lines are too common and very much known. I didn't find any new creative approach on those. So according to me it's good in parts. Just my personal opinion... that's it!

  • 16 years ago

    by iFallToPieces

    Wow this is really sweet.

    From the first time you spoke to me I knew this was true
    I could tell your love for me, nothing could undo
    You are like a little kid, tripping me up
    Because baby I feel head over heels for you

    My favourite Stanza ober awesome

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