Broken Promises

by SashaMirage   Jan 1, 2009


Sorry "I love you" was said
Believe I never meant it
Sorry for all the time wasted
Wish to take back every second

Promises made about forever
How very short, this eternity
Adrenalin pumps, what a rush
Breaking chains, forever free

Take a few steps back, create space
No more tears, ocean size distance
Anticipating long awaited departure
Lost years, regretting past decisions

Golden Sun sets upon broken promises
Shattered thoughts, embracing a lie
Believing fake words, heart deceived
Building mountains, reaching the sky

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  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    Wow. What a true poem.. im sure most people could relate to having a fake relationship.. a relationship built off lies.
    I really loved your opening stanza. It was so strong, like, dont worry, i dont actually love you, kinda thing.
    Your poem was very sad, but it was really well written. The flow was good too :]
    I really felt the emotions in this poem, which is really good.
    Definitely 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Heba

    Oh Wow.I can really feel your deep pain and sorrow,but we all meet in our life some people who are fake and big liers or cheaters and I had some troubles with those people too.But,Insha''Allah you will get over this because you are a strong faithful person.Insah'allah everything is going to be okay and there will be an
    enternal shinning sun in your life.Ya Rab.

    Well done.5\5...

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    There is so much emotion goin through this poem.The words that you chose really makes the poem stands out.Though it's a sad poem i think you have penned it down beautifully;)

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