Liquid Sunshine - Haiku

by Cara   Jan 11, 2009


Liquid Sunshine

Silver droplets fall
Landing on parched, dry terrain
Making the Earth gleam

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  • 15 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    Oh, your talking about the sun, lol, sorry my mind went the other way on this one. lol. stupid amarican (to myself). lol 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    A absoluetly mind-blowing haiku, the imagery portrayed is extraordinary and really gives me clear images and pictures. Great job, you created such a beautiful masterpiece that was a joy to read. 5/5 from me, take care...

  • 15 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Beautiful haiku... I specially loved the title here ... describing sunshine as liquid...

    wonderfull read...

  • 15 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    Wow the imagery was beautiful! I loved the title it really brought a smile to my face because I have never thought of rain this way. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    You have managed to capture the essence of the your title really well.With so little words you have describe it perfectly. I like how you describe rain as silver droplet.Excellent Job