Where The Ocean Meets the Shore - Sedoka

by Cara   Jan 20, 2009


Where the Ocean Meets the Shore

Pristine blue water
Flows alongside pure white sand
Waves glide across the shoreline

Providing pleasure
Basking under the hot sun
Swimming in the oceans grip

**Thankyou to Porcy for the title**

Sedoka is a form of Japanese poetry, consisting of two stanzas, syllables - 5/7/7 for each.

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  • 16 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    You managed to truely capture the essence of a what seems to be a tropical paradise. Your beautiful description has put me in a very calm and happy state of mind. Great Job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by richelle castro

    Hey, nice poem can you teach me sedoka? am not really familiar with a sedoka..thanx!

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Congratulations on the win, it was so well-deserved and I'm happy you got it! Take care...

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    You won, my dear little Australian girlfriend:)
    I am so proud of you Cara and this truly was a winner and so are you.

    Super hugs,

    Ingridxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    Very well done. I enjoyed this and this form of poetry is one of my favorite that is currently out there. I enjoy a lot of these simple poems, as it is those that make up and tell you the most about a person.

    I can Honestly say that this picture is the type of picture that you want to have in your mind when you think of something along these lines.

    Wonderfully done.

    Thank you very much for the comment on my poem.

    5/5

    Yours Sincerely,
    Shaun Aka Dark Savior.

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