I Gave Up On You

by PoeticalHeartless   Jan 26, 2009


Damn dad it's been so Long; Since i Wrote You A Poem. Well i Have No Words For You; i'm disappointed in you. Because you Left Me Standing Alone Again. I Remember When You tOld Me, "The Skys The Limit" And it is i'm Not Gone Lie. It is; The UnderworLd aint. i Gave Up On You. I'm Not The LittLe Girl That WouLd Wait For You At The Window And Say, "Mommy When's He Coming.?" i Grew The **** Up And ReaLized You Was Never Coming.! And When You Came Around, it Didnt Even Seem Like You Was There. I Mean if You Passed Away, I'd Cry But i Mean You Was Never There Like i Thought You WouLd be. And When i Cried MySelf To SLeep At Night Because Of You; i Looked At Myself And Stopped Crying And Wipe The Blood Off My Arms And Kept Moving. i Don't Need You; Your A disappointed.! I Gave Up On You dad; Wait Rewind You Don't Even deserve The TitLe dad. Ima Call You Jose. Because That's Your Name. Your Not My father. And i'm Not Your Daughter Remember.? i Grew Up; Now its Your Turn; Your Not A Teenager Stop fu***** Dirty Pussies; And Smoking Blunts And Stop Drinking. And Look At YourSelf in The Mirror And Ask YourSelf, "do i have a daughter.?" Because As Of Tonight You OnLy have YourseLf. Because i Don't BeLieve in You Anymore. I Gave Up On You dad; Just Like You did With Me. But i Made it. Now its Your turn.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Mommys Lil Angel

    I kno how u feel i left my dad and wen i lost him he tried to be there for me and he came around more and more and then wen i needed him most he wasnt there so dont think jst kuz hes showin up more that he'll be there wen u need him hes gonna be there wen he needs u and thats it and i could feel the anger very good i mean if thats wat u were ruttin for

    well all my love
    katie

  • 15 years ago

    by Obscura

    You poem was very powerful and heartfelt you have a lot of anger it needed to be paragraphed but apart from that it was really a exelent piece of work

  • 15 years ago

    by Benny Boi

    O _0 ... Wow... great way to release that pent up frustration hun. Really hope everything gets back on track for him, and yourself.

    The poem by the way, was very raw... powerful... and a great release for you i hope.

    My love goes out to you hun!

    Be safe