Never Come Back

GREAT POEM!
this relates to a situation a had once :/

I enjoyed the fast paced scene you created here and how you were "telling" him to do these things because he had already done them. I do think it was a bit repetitive and kinda cliche but yet another good vent poem with a lot of potential. The language was a bit simple, maybe you can try experimenting with new things, it will help you grow as a writer. I could tell this one also came from your heart because you packed it wil emotion my only advice is try stepping out of the box and try new things.

This was really sad, though you have a gift for words i really enjoyed this one good job

This piece was very nicely written. It was a heartfelt write and a great read. Short and simple but powerful and meaningful. I like how you started the poem, it really caught my attention. I also like the story behind the poem, it's relateable, to me anyway. . The only thing i didn't like was the uneven flow. But over all 5/5

I really liked this one. It's a heartbreaking poem to read. but I liked how you put everything together. so many people have felt this way before. I feel the same way as some parts of this poem too. good stuff. =)