Hi

by ben thompson   Feb 5, 2009


Closing my eyes to sleep at night, only your face do I see.
Fantasies and dreams my reality when your here with me.

Deepest longings and wishes embodied in our every kiss.
Sadness now so far away, as we catch up on things missed.

Dark days gone forever, blissful light now shining through.
Happiness once again rules my world now that I have you.

Sweet passion envelops my essence, our bodies melt into one.
Salaciously exploring every curve, you've become my sun.

Thanking my good fortune, holding you close to my heart.
Praying to the Lord above, our lives paths will never part.

Lying entranced, your head on my shoulder under a velvet sky.
Two lovers found each other, it all started with a simple, "hi".

written for a very special women alisha.

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  • 12 years ago

    by mandy

    Beautifully written and very sweet. The flow was consistent, and I really liked the format you chose. Great write, 5/5!

    mandy :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    This is indeed a beautiful love poem. So well written and expressed.. to that special someone. Bravo!

  • 12 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    What a nice dedication to your special someone. I am glad you found someone who inspires you to write in happy style. i know how you love the dark side :)

  • 12 years ago

    by sneha

    Well written.last 2 lines my fav.5

  • 12 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Nicely written with beautiful sentiment within. Great rhyming..

    My only criticism...the two line couplet arrangement is a bit distracting...I'd try putting them in 4 line stanzas instead...nicely done...beautiful dedication...Love Aunt Debbie