Ever Changing

Your words made the experience of reading this poem so beautiful. Simply awesome.

all the best and take care

Majestic waters flowing
A river full of dreams
Carving pathways down through time
With water that redeems

^^ The imagery in this stanza is amazing. I love this line "A river full of dreams" It brings to mind the hope and life and past that the water provides.

You'll never feel the same way twice
Each steps a brand new day
Waters cleansing everything
Washing sins away

^^^ Reminds me again of the baptisms in the river.

Somewhere in the ocean
The pain is left to die
Life still ever flowing
This river you and I

^^ Where does the pain go when all is washed away, are we swimming in the sins of others.

I absolutely loved this poem and thought you did such a magnificent job of blending it well. Fantastic Job!

Jenn
This is really a beautiful poem...Life is ever changing. The imagery and wording are great.

Our love is like that river
Each second bringing change
Here and now so comfortable
Tomorrow seeming strange

So many times in our lives thing change out of no where.......always challenging.

But we hold on to the knowledge
This too, will cease to be
We'll float into a new beginning
Loving
You and me

BUt if two people that really love each other hold onto their love....and work through the trials that come their way they will come out on top and much stronger from the experiences.
Excellent!
Love Cindy