Love You

by a broken smile with a broken heart is a poets life   Feb 15, 2009


I will tell you how much I love you,
I will sing to you my song.
I will always cherish you,
Hand by hand we walk.

I took a chance to love you,
It turned out to feel so right,
Sometimes I feel scared by our future,
but I just take one step at a time.

When a tear drop tries to find its way down my cheek
You stop it and kiss my lips,
With you I have fallen in love,
In your arms I find my heart.

Slowly my heart heals,
Slowly I gain control,
On this valentines day my love,
I feel so much joy,

Loving you has brought me happiness,
Loving you has taught me patience,
Being with you I feel peaceful,
Being with you I find my soul...

**Dedicated to some one special..Adam**
Love your Turkey Head...

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  • 15 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Awww. hat was so sweet. Adam is a lucky guy. You really put your heart into this poem. :]

    Cayce

  • 15 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    I really don't like love poems.. >< Mostly because there's nothing new.. it's just the same old stuff.. so I don't want to really critique this.. because it'll sound really mean, and it's not just your poem, it's all love poems. But I'll point out a few things.. :]

    Hand by hand we walk.
    -- I think this would sound better like.. "Hand in hand we walk. Just a suggestion.

    In your arms I find my heart.
    -- This is definitely my favorite line in the whole poem. I don't know why.. I guess it's because it's a little different.

    Anyways.. I think it was really sweet and you wrote it from your heart. It sounds like you've got a great guy. Haha. :]

    Keep writing!
    Cayce

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