I Imagine (Loop Poetry)

by Sylvia   Feb 16, 2009


I imagine your sensitive, sensible arms, exquisite
exquisite, exciting arms holding me, hands touching,
touching, teasing hands caressing me tenderly.
Tenderly, tasting, kissing my trembling lips.

Lips waiting for your delicate kiss, delightful.
Delightful, delicious, kiss me as if there is no tomorrow,
tomorrow, the day after a night of ecstasy, inviting
inviting, insightful day for us to love each other.

Other feelings, making love to you, comforting, confident, reciting
reciting, responsive, our need to be together.
Together we will reach for the heavens, wonderful
wonderful, wondrous orgasmic pleasure waits for us, things I imagine.

Copyright © 2009 Sylvia All Rights Reserved
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Loop Poetry - Created by Miss Take. There are no restrictions on the number of stanzas nor on the syllable count for each line. In each stanza, the last word of the first line becomes the first word of line two, last word of line 2 becomes the first word of line 3, last word of line 3 becomes the first word of line 4. This is followed for each stanza. The rhyme scheme is abcb.

Variations:

Stanzas, writers choice on the number, no rhyming, the last word, first word scheme is maintained.

One long stanza, no limit on number of lines, no rhyming scheme, the last word, first word scheme is maintained.

Couplets mixed with 4 line stanzas, the last word, first word scheme is maintained in the stanzas. It can also be used in the couplets. Rhyme scheme is ab, cc, defg, hh, ii, jklm, nn, oo.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    What a wonderfully written poem! A great poetry form that I have yet to see.

    You did such a beautiful job making this poem sensual and not making it "too much".. it was beautiful without going over the top..

    Your words flowed with one another very well, and the words used were amazing.

    Some great alliterations were used within this piece.

    "I imagine your sensitive, sensible arms, exquisite"
    `Sensitive, sensible arms. almost a tongue twister.. ;]

    A great form and an amazing challenge. You pulled it off very nicely. :]

    Well done.

    5/5.

  • 15 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Very nice & pleasurable! I can feel the love & passion just seeping..a good read! As for the
    form it looks easy but at the same time we
    have to make sure it all makes sense..good work!

  • 15 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Hey Sylvia, this was a beautiful example of a poem of sensual love.
    Quite descriptive without going over board, a nice classy poem.
    As for the loop poetry i've always liked it, it can be tricky to get it to work though and you've done an excellent job.
    Well done

    Grant

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    A very sensual write, but you kept it very respectful and i like that. You managed to make it really steamy, but it didnt lose any of its class. Very well done.
    I love this form of poetry, ive seen it around a fair bit lately and it amazes me. You used the form really well and it was a great piece.
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by The Prince

    So much beautiful imagery here, it's also a good example of Miss Takes loop poetry! There is so much to take in here! Loved it, it's a real pleasure to read!