Comments : Flower

  • 10 years ago

    by Kylie Jo

    Timmy your amazing at writing i really like it <333
    5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by SAINTS MATE

    Thats great... so sad... makes me feel so sad inside... omfg
    lolz
    great work
    keep going!!
    peace
    Margii
    xx

  • 10 years ago

    by Kianna

    Incredible, i love it...great job Timmy

  • 9 years ago

    by Poetic Justice

    I love how u use the symbolism of the flower.

  • 9 years ago

    by Nomad Being

    Just lay in your sanctuary which you thought was home
    It's just a fray of everything I've ever known

    nice lines... n nice poems!

  • 9 years ago

    by MeganLeigh

    Nice poem, it was so sad but very descriptive and lovely :) Keep writing

  • 9 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    Nice write - good words and perfectly placed. I think I would have left off the last line. It seemed to end without any problems just before that last line. keep up the good works.

  • 9 years ago

    by Blah Blah Blahhhh

    This is really amazin.! nice flow of words.! wow i love how descriptive it is.!
    5/5

    -Tania:)

  • 8 years ago

    by TheVampire

    That was beautiful yet just so sad. The flow and description just kept the whole peice together and it really made a sad poem into something really beautiful.
    Great job.

  • 8 years ago

    by Lori

    This is such a beautiful poem! I loved your word structure and your overall passion you showed for this poem. Great job!

  • 8 years ago

    by Dominique Lewis

    Timmy,
    I wish I could of been the one for you, but it just never seem to happen. You are my bestfriend and you always will be. But, I'm afraid I can't be anything more than just a friend. I am sorry that I am doing this to you, but I just have to. So the flower does cry too. And it cries for you. I love you Timmy! Never forget that.

    Love,
    Nikki

  • 8 years ago

    by Hollow Face

    Amazing! Wow you're great!

  • 8 years ago

    by Liliana

    Very talented indeed keep it up 5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by Gone

    I loved it... It was so full of emotion and how you used a flower as the symbol is amazing. Way to go! :)

    5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by NicoleBaby101

    Awww that is really sad but very beautiful.....i think it is amazing....wonderful work...keep writing....5/5

  • 7 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Wow. This piece is amazing. The imagery and descriptions are beautiful. I love this!! There is a wonderful word choice which forms a terrific flow.

    On the other hand however, I am sorry you feel/felt this way

  • 7 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    I love this(:

    The pain & sadness you feel is obvious as nothing helps. It flowed perfectly.
    great job
    5/5

  • 7 years ago

    by Carissa

    I like this poem (: Its funny because I wrote one similar. Its called "The Flower" you should check it out. I liked the description and it had a very unique rhythum I enjoyed this very much (:

  • 7 years ago

    by Ebony Hope

    My gosh this piece is amazing. You have done a fantastic job, because the emotion is all there, as is imagery. Fantastic job.

  • 7 years ago

    by ImperfectlyBeautiful

    That was beautiful i love it!!
    keep up the good work!!! rtf?

    <Katie