Puzzled like midnight

by D Jon Versatino   Mar 9, 2009


God, does love has a black side,
Or, will it trueness last forever?
Will I be dead if unzipped the hidden truth in my heart?
Will she hate this sweetest song my heart plays?
Oh, I am puzzled like midnight,
Wondering if the moon will keep her smiling light forever

I have loved her right from the first eye sight,
Long as I can remember, but in secret
Things about her are creamily the heavens

I love her even before knowing who she was,
In the presence of God she had been my goddess
My feelings are deep
Building new strength every day.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Martha

    I love this poem...I wish he felt that too when he loved me right when he first talked to me

    but anyways, I LOVE IT!!!! SUPERB!

  • 16 years ago

    by D Jon Versatino

    Thanks greatly for the comment!

    D'

  • 16 years ago

    by Elliott Lica

    Very well written, yes a few typos but easily overlooked GOOD JOB

  • 16 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Aww this is such a beautiful poem... I really like it.
    I especially loved the lines:
    "Will she hate this sweetest song my heart plays?
    Oh, I am puzzled like midnight,
    Wondering if the moon will keep her smiling light forever"

    I think it's great but to make it better I think you should just fix the line : "Ma feelings is deep" and change it to "My feelings are deep"

    Other than that, very well done!

  • 16 years ago

    by Love is a Beautiful Thing

    Aww whos this one for ..your gf? its really good

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