by perfectlyBROKEN Mar 11, 2009
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
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I applaude you |
by Brenden
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I thought you expressed yourself very well in this piece. The ending was my favorite part and how you ended with the title of the piece. great job on this poem. |
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That was good. it expressed alot. keep it up its great! |
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Very good poem, good job.. I know the feeling.. |
by Aveena
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It was really niice, it shows some good feelings.. I know the feeling.. keep it up .. |
by Heba
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Wow,it was really beautiful..I used to have the same feelings about some friends.. |