For You Are.

Beautifully worded feelings of love and security:)

Sometimes we have this overpowering feeling of knowing that a person is meant for us. Reading this I feel you have found him;)

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

"Breezes of wind blow my hair away from my face,
Letting me see the world around me,
Close my eyes tight and let the tears fall,
For you are no where, no where at all."

A very entrancing opening, nice imagery and thoughts written down. I love in the last line how you repeat "no where", nice job.

"I hear your voice, somewhere distant.
A melodic chorus relaxing me.
Closing my eyes I blindly step forward,
Knowing that you are the one I trust."

Wow, I am speechless! The imagery and visuals described here are amazing!
I mean "melodic chorus relaxing me" that sounds very much so enchanting. I can picture that now. Well-expressed emotions of how you trust him so much and how he is yours forever.

"Your voice leads me straight to you,
Opening my eyes I can see you,
Standing in front of me smiling bright.
For you are here, with me forever more."

Excellent ending, satisfied me when I read it.
Not much more I can say, I saw no flaws, this is truly a breathtaking masterpiece. Keep up the great work, take care....

God Bless You!

~MaryAnne