by xXHunnyGurlXx Mar 17, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
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The rain pours down, |
by Saving Grace
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This is so powerful. Your rhyme scheme was perfect, it was just right, like it just flowed so well because it doesnt sound forced and like youve tried too hard. Very well written. 5/5 |
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AMAZING.. LOve it <3 Great job. 5/5 |