My prayer

by Xx Grieving from the inside outxX   Mar 17, 2009


As I lay down to sleep
I pray for my soul to speak
as I sleep were clouds pass by
I will never open my eye's
but my biggest fear is saying goodbye
but in my dreams fears only lie
but in this dream lovers say goodbye
can lovers be really friends ?
because after all this is a dream all along

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  • 16 years ago

    by Bogie

    This read like dreaming a dream of a
    dream as you are dreaming a dream.

    but my biggest fear is saying goodbye
    but in my dreams fears only lie
    but in this dream lovers say goodbye
    Can lovers be really friends?
    because after all this is a dream all along

    I would say yes.
    Because in your dreams you fear saying
    goodbye. But in this dream you never said
    goodbye your lovers did.

    Because after all is this a dream you
    dream your friends are your lovers?

    Excellent read indeed Write On,
    Bogie

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