Bliss (Lanturne)

by Italian Stallion   Mar 23, 2009


.....Bliss
....native
beauty heart,
tender full of
...Sought.

© Copyright 2009 By: Italian Stallion

***Written for a contest***

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Lanturne poems have a syllable count of 1,2,3,4,1

must resemble the shape of a japanese lanturn.
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  • 15 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Great word choice for this Lanturne

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    With so little words you have managed to capture the essence of a blissful feeling. The form is really well done. Keep it up

  • 15 years ago

    by The Prince

    I attempted to do one of these before but I got frustrated with it! I loved this, small and sweet with lovely meaning behind it. You nail every form you attempt, keep up the great work.

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