I must say, this is quite an interesting poem, after reading the previous poem, this is a huge step up. I didn't bother commenting on the poem, because my opinions were mine alone, and probably wouldn't have been a good critique.
Anyways, this was a really well thought out poem. You had a lot of vivid imagery in your piece. The rhymes were very creative, and good, except for the last one. I always find the word 'again' hard to rhyme because how I say it, doesn't rhyme with how you would. I pronounce it a-gain. Anyways, that's just my own opinion. Other than that it was a very moving poem, with a lot of amazingly well thought out lines.
"Lets hide from ourselves today
So we never confront what we fear
Near life and death experiences
Never there but always near"
I really enjoyed that verse the most, it was really profound. The last line of that verse seemed very paradoxal, which created a really enigmatic vibe. Good stuff overall on this poem. I'm hoping to read more like this from you.