So touching.. just like in my past. nice one. :]

Wow, really nice.

Wow, that has a lot of emotion in it. I really like it.

Awww it has some very moving emotion in it like i reader can feel ur pain i know i can i now how that feel's.

Aaron this one is just gr8 and the ending is just soo sad
keep on writing friend u r gifted
5/5
lili

Its good... i like the flow and the amount of emotion brought into it. keep it up 5/5

Once Again it happened
I was shot out of the sky
This time for no real reason
I felt my heart die

^^Rhyming was good. I stuttered when i red these lines 4 sum reason.. maybe it was the flow?

Once again it happened
My heart was torn from my chest
Now i dont know what to do
I feel like I am dead to the rest

^^great rhyming & flow. it fitted perfect.

Once again it happened
I'm getting really tired of this crap
But i guess its inevitable
Maybe.. I'll take an endless nap

^^This expressed alot in these short lines, great flow & rhymes.

Well done. Keep it up!
*Hunny*

**Im getting tired of this crap.

This flows better 4 me thort id let you know. lol

*Hunny*

Holy wow....
really good job...
no...
great job...
amazing<3

Awww. very nice poem. But look to the bright side of things and maybe it wasn't ment to be. If they don't love you whats the point to be with them any way. good job 5/5

You can just feel the twisted emotion in this. The everyday stress of life.
once again great job.=]

victoria