Trapped

by Mark   Apr 21, 2009


The myth of a monster appears in his mind
comparing with rumors is making him blind
darkness walks beside his side
flying along with his inner pride

a nest of feelings soon ready to burst
wrapping his eyes with inner thirst
flashing red light appears in his sight
now is his time to be one with the fight

---I wrote this without having any idea where it went. I wrote it in 5-7 min. and I came up with the firs line when I was out smoking. When I got stuck, I had to end, just to see where it went.---

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  • 15 years ago

    by silvertung69

    Vary good poem,prety good even flow to.
    I like poms with depth tho. I feel you could of gone deeper with it if you could of waited for it it could of grown.

  • 15 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    I came up with the firs line when I was out smoking.
    --- Nice Mark. XD

    darkness walks beside his side
    --- Haha, that line was hard to say.. but I liked it a lot. :]

    I loved how it all flowed together really well. I write poems where I don't know what they mean alllll the time. They just pop into my head. I think the word choice really made this a good poem.. and yeah. It was good. XD

    Yay, go Mark! :]

    Cayce.

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