Self Betrayal?

by Outcast   Apr 24, 2009


-----------------------------------
Motionless arms
Fingers clenched to the palm
Rain descents from calm sky's
A change of scenery, to help this mystery
Suspense as the future is my destiny
Pure jurny of dicovery
Examining the unknown
No corner Left unexplored
My guide will help me
He's now terned against me
...I now bleed...
-----------------------------------

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    This is very interesting and creative, I really like how youv'e worded the poem =] Great job. The flow is good and so is the structure.

  • 16 years ago

    by DreamingOutLoud

    One of your most creative poems! =)