Dreams And Daggers

This is extremely ironic for me, because last night, my "family" got into a huge argument and I ended up leaving @ 2 in the morning. This is, if I can be inserted into the character's sopt, my hope for light at the end of the tunnel. Very good as it speaks to me

5/5
Wishmaster

She realized he was gone
Dreaming simply to remember
Two stupid confused kids
Memories fade into embers

*This is so sad, but at the same time very beautiful. I love the imagery and the diction*

Pain envelopes her heart
Tears fall into the ashes
Veins are cauterized shut
Her life, all but crashes

*Wow...your diction is so intense here. I love how stong this stanza is*

Numbed to her own reality
Daggers pierce her heart
Each new face drives it deeper
Remaining complex as Descartes

*You have such a way with words. The flow is amazing and the style is one of my favorites*

This is the beginning
Dreams and daggers thrive
Forgetting love....and him
Waiting to be revived....

*This was such a good poem. I didn't see any errors. Very deep and emotional piece. Keep it up. Nik*

This is exactly how I'm feeling. Really nice, emotive write. Good job!