Sad, Love Story..

by Splashley   May 12, 2009


I held up my bottle; put a gun to my head. I want to forget everything that you said. Like how you wanted her over me and lose all our precious memories. I pull the trigger as I hold my bottle. Tears come streaming down my face. Oh, how I loved you like no tomorrow. But your love faded away.

You stand there holding the hand of the woman you now love; reading my tombstone that's covered in flowers saying that I died too young. A little tear rolled down his cheek. Screaming filled the air. You say "I loved you, now your gone forever, wow this life isn't fair."

He holds up his bottle; puts a gun to his head. He wants to forget everything that he said...

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  • 14 years ago

    by The Shadowlust Inside Me

    I thought this poem is a great reflection on "regret" and i think it was well written although slightly confusing mainly because of how it was set out.. maybe spacing it out.. making the lines more defined this problem could be fixed .. just a suggestion

    >shadow<

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    You stand there holding the hand of the woman you now love; reading my tombstone that's covered in flowers saying that I died too young.

    *This was my favorite part. I really love how you express yourself here. Very sad poem, but well written. Nice work. Nik*

  • 14 years ago

    by kylexthexmagnificent

    Wow... this was a sad poem but kinda confusing.

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