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by ForsakenBeautyXx   May 13, 2009


Sometimes I wonder;
If this is where I'm meant to stand;
I ponder & ponder;
When will someone come to take my hand?

Alone in the dark;
As these shadows see through my soul;
My heart has a scared mark;
Leaving an empty hole.

I wait; & I wait;
but no one seems to come;
I sit and comtemplate;
I just want to go home.

Home.
Where is it that it stands?

I will never find my way;
If no one comes to take my hand.

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  • 14 years ago

    by RoseBlood

    You know, we all have times in life when we feel lost with the wish to get out of our troubles, but we aren't able to do that without some help. It is a dark age of someone's life, and I really hope you don't feel that way, that it is just a fiction, imagination or something like that.
    I also like the fact that you don't seem to follow a strict scheme in this poem, which it turned out very good, and it gives the poem more emotion.
    Well done.
    Keep it up.
    5/5
    Carla

  • 14 years ago

    by Shannon Loter

    I adore this poem :]

    "As these shadows see through my soul"

    i love how you worded it.

    <33333

  • 14 years ago

    by Esther

    I like this, the middle lines, the ending i think comes too soon. sorry, don't take it personally, i like the poem though.

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