by Hollywood May 13, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
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I can't see your smile |
by Lady Nik
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This was such a strong poem. The way you express your feelings is very creative and easy to understand. I can relate to what your saying. Very good work hun. Nik |
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Wow another fantastic poem |
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Omg.. this was so sad.. i squeezed out a tear, great job sweetie, very emotional. oh btw fix, paciently, its patiently :) |
by Dan
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That last stanza seemed so joy filled. In a poem of sadness it was a contrast. Not as in a bad way, but it gave me perspective. |