Your smile

by Hollywood   May 13, 2009


I can't see your smile

I can't see your smile
I have been waiting for so long
waiting bedside,
Waiting to see your smile
But it's locked behind the gold door
Your face is pale
Your hands are cold
A black cloud rests above your head.

I can't see your smile
Though I patiently waited,
bedside,for the death of today
Grieving for you
I am not grieving for you
Only because I'll see you once again
In the skys above,
Just please wait for me!

Your face is pale
Your hands are cold
And I am sitting bedside
only for you to wake up
and tell me this is all a joke
But you are not waking up
I want you to wake up
Kiss me softly
Hug me so sweetly
I want most for you to say you'll never leave me.

I can't see your smile
I am not grieving

I can't see your smile
But I'll see you once again
Death is near
For myself
Death is peaceful
We all live to die
So I guess I'll see you later!!
Goodbye my love!

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  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    This was such a strong poem. The way you express your feelings is very creative and easy to understand. I can relate to what your saying. Very good work hun. Nik

  • 14 years ago

    by LoveKeepsMeStrong

    Wow another fantastic poem
    You are such a good writer

    Keep it up! (haha you always do!)
    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by kylexthexmagnificent

    Omg.. this was so sad.. i squeezed out a tear, great job sweetie, very emotional. oh btw fix, paciently, its patiently :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Dan

    That last stanza seemed so joy filled. In a poem of sadness it was a contrast. Not as in a bad way, but it gave me perspective.

    -Dan

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