Confront Distortion

by Danielle   Jun 4, 2009


Confront distortion,
Calming tide riped to disillusion.
Strange this world to see,
Slowly falling,
Sighing lightly.

I meant to fall on a cloud.
Dashed to cultured cement.
Churned into crazy existence,
Exercising rights,
That seem to not exist.

Only the strange die young,
Eating minds slowly.
Muting wisdom stands--
The truth may lie beyond the hills,
But somehow,
Insanity seems better.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Congrats on your win :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    A brilliant write, that really made me think. I enjoyed this piece, you have much talent, making the reader ponder what you have written about, such a thought-provoking poem. Congrats on the win, you deserved it! God Bless You!

    ~MaryAnne

  • 14 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    This is a thought provoking piece. I like the word choice although I was wondering why you chose to say sighing lightly instead of softly.

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