When God Became My Piano Keys

by Good Enough   Jun 7, 2009


Fingers flowing gently across the keys
Whiles melodies capture your heart
And my song catches your sacred tears
I'll hold you close as the pain fills your soul
Let me play you another love song

As the piano sings to the heavens below
The angels will fly freely along each note
Your body will be lifted as I hit the high notes
an when I play that single low key
You'll feel gods hands carry you

My heart is now the piano keys
and while God's in my heart
He will be playing my simple melodies
That will rush out in beautiful streams
With dark reds and beautiful blues

I'll let God become you beautiful love song
As He dances on the lovely piano keys
My heart is sewn with his love
As the piano finishes its last note
You'll know this beautiful love song is what he created

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  • 14 years ago

    by katie

    Very well written. Love the whole poem and very good title.

  • 14 years ago

    by Madison

    Thats a beautiful poem,

  • 14 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    Nice work. So deep and so beautiful. Youve done a good job at painting an image in the readers head, its very descriptive. Very well done. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by that Dude

    Wow, this one is deep...
    Yes, you R a deep thinker.

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    A few minor changes but other than these few suggestions, youve penned a outstanding write.. so beautiful.. I really loved your metaphor of God being the keys on the piano.. so unique and so beautiful. Reading this poem just really soothes the readers soul and is written with such beauty.. I loved it. It just is soo uplifting and graceful.

    "That will rush out in beautiful streams
    With dark reds and beautiful blues"
    `You shouldnt be so repetitive with beautiful.. be careful. :]

    "I'll let God become you beautiful love song"
    `your not your.. again watch your repetivness of 'beautiful' a synoymn for beautiful should be used.. so that you can eliminate this repetitiveness

    "You'll know this beautiful love song is what he created"
    `Repetiveness again with beautiful..

    Your poem flows so nicely but with your repetitiveness of beautiful I think that really hurt the poem towards the end. Try and eliminate that desire to repeat a word, it will really help with the flow in the long run.

    Well done however. I really enjoyed this write, the metaphor was awesome.

    5/5.

    Temps.
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