The Gift

by Beautiful Disaster   Jun 16, 2009


I hope you said your prayer tonight,
Even though god cannot help you now.
Ive been under here for sometime,
Waiting for you to fall asleep.

Like a trapped rabbit in a hole,
Ill smoke you out,
And eat you whole.

Your life is in my grasp.
As blood pours from my mouth,
Ill sit
Watch
And wait... As you slowly suffer.

For the gift of death I hand to you with pleasure,
And this memory I will forever treasure.

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  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Nicely executed. It kept me entertained and I wanted to keep on reading. The length it's good. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Wow this is a really dark poem but I like it. I like how your voice is of some kind of angel of death and how you're getting revenge of somebody you clearly want dead. It's really interesting. Good job.

  • 14 years ago

    by Kianna

    Wicked Awesome!! I love it!
    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Obscura

    This poem is great the words in it are really effective the structure is brilliant really adds to the effect of the poem the rythem is great

    well done

  • 14 years ago

    by Kaila

    Again the flow was a tad off. Although I liked the rabbit bit in here. It gave the reader something else to think about. It wasn't cliche. I think if you elaborated more it could being more life to the poem. nice job
    5.5

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