Essay

by Italian Stallion   Jun 24, 2009


All done; done all.
Revised, I must be wise.
Paper written; written paper.
Displayed, what I have made.
Finally done; done finally.
Embraced, scripted in lace.

© Copyright 2009 By: Italian Stallion

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  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This was brilliant Joe, it was so simple and short, but was so descriptive and well-worded. This poem made me smile, as I love the topics you write your poems on!

    I really liked the repetition of writing two words then reversing them. I also liked the use of the "," and ";"s, it was very effective.

    5/5 from me, a powerful write, I enjoyed this one!

    Take care and keep writing...

    ~MaryAnne

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    I am sooo your inspiration. :]

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