Wow, that brang tears to my eyes. I know it's not easy but everything you said was everything i felt. I've been through this, and i'm with you saying it's not easy at all. goodluck xx

Twelve years old, I was left unconscious on the ground
I couldn't move an inch, I was just waiting to be found
A few hours later a man found me lying in the pouring rain
I wouldn't talk for weeks, and I would never be the same

*That was my favorite stanza. I can really relate to that feeling. Something so horrible happening that changes you forever. I think this was an excellent poem and so very personal. I'm glad I read this. I felt like you put so many emotions in this poem and they were all so clearly expressed. Wonderful work ^.^ Nik*

Very well written dark poem again about the unthinkable

Wow!! Definately a 5/5! This is so sad, i really hope its not true! deeply moving, a beautifully written poem, with a perfect flow, good simple rhyme scheme, kept my attention throughout, i was almost 'hooked' all the way till the end... This is one of the best I've read in a long time.. the ending was perrfectt! dont stop writing! take care... MEZi...x

I liked the theme throughout this poem, how each stanza started with a new verse and it was definitely a sad read. My only complaint would be the rhyming, a lot of times it felt forced to me and I would find the flow becoming choppy. Elsewise a good read, sad, but well done. 4/5

This poem hits where it hurts; you wrote something so dark and sad in simplicity; good work!!!

Gave me goosebumps, truly chilling, what's sad is it happens all the time and people who should be there to help turn a blind eye.

This is the most tragic poem I have read yet it seems familiar. I don't think it should be changed. I hope things are better now
keep writting