The Only Truth

by Mezmeryz   Jul 3, 2009


Why do I feel like this?
My heart is ready to burst,
There's too much pain inside,
And this is not a first.

It's been like this for days,
Ever since you left me,
I don't think of anything else,
My eyes no longer see.

I no longer pick up phone calls,
No longer check to see,
How anyone else is doing,
It seems you've blinded me.

See I never cared for anyone,
I never gave a damn,
How anyone was feeling,
And for myself I'd stand.

Now I can't think of anything,
Or anyone but you,
You're my best friend for eternity;
That's the only thing that's true.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Robert Anthony

    I enjoy it, has a good flow, 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Bama Girl

    This is amazing i love your work!

  • 14 years ago

    by Bama Girl

    This is a great poem i love the way it sounds great job

  • 14 years ago

    by Jessica

    Very good poem, and nice flow. It seems very honest and heartfelt and you expressed your emotions very nicely. Good job 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    'Why do I feel like this?
    My heart is ready to burst,
    There's too much pain inside,
    And this is not a first.'
    `Good beginning, flows nicely, simply written.. 'my heart is ready to burst' was a little cliche but it works.

    Sweet poem, how no matter what youre always thinking about this person, and nobody else crosses your mind but them. Simple write but with the repetition you got your point across nicely.

    Well done.

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