For Him I Have Been Saved

by Hallo A Lilium   Jul 13, 2009


I stand in the light of the sun's ray,
feeling like I'm under the spotlight.
It's a miracle and I thought I heard god say,
You will live happily my child, it will be alright.

My heart is full of warmth at the message he gave,
I'll try to be obedient, because for him I have been saved.

Copyright (c) 2009 Lilium

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  • 14 years ago

    by Spirit

    I like the multiple meanings that "he" could have. He could be the child, the father, the parent, the teacher, even god depending on how you read it. The different number of people that you could be talking make this poem more vercitile, and thus more powerful to the readers.

    Great job and thanks for the read.

  • 14 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    "suns rays" should be "sun's rays".

    This was a short but powerful piece, well-expressed thoughts and feelings, you really get the reader into this piece, and you had me wanting more at the end. Excellent job, keep writing, always and forever..

    ~MaryAnne

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