Divine Unity

by Poet on the Piano   Jul 13, 2009


Lipstick stained sheets
Curve around our figures
Like summer afternoons
Intoxicating us with
Torrid passion.

Our inseparable souls
Weave melodies filled
With sentimental lyrics
That were engraved upon
Angels' satin wings.

Sunshine seeps through
The facade generously
Streaming with buoyancy
Shielding us willfully
'Til it can bear no more.

The day wears on
Continuing without
Our presence
As we experience
Real paradise.

The phone sounds
Watchful cloaks turn
Impatient horns
Are shrieking
And you hesitate.

Pleading arises from
My lips faintly
The desire is too
Overwhelming
You just can't resist.

As night rolls in
With its polished smile
We both realize that
This is only the
Very beginning.

Words can't begin
To define true love
But it's moments like
These that portray
Divine unity.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Aish

    Dude-seriously-you are 14 years old!!!!!!!!!!
    this is amazing!!!!!!!!!!

    again-i dont think i can fault it. the vocab is great, story is passionate, intriguing and expressed very well.

    another 5/5 girl
    very impressive

    aish
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by xXxXhes the everything i cudve asked forXxXx

    Great poem. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Everything about this poem was fantastic, your use of words, the flow and the imagery. Excellent job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Light A Way

    I really love this poem..I really love the first line "Lipstick stained sheets"...WOW!!!!...This is my favorite one from you...keep writing always...

    Vanessa

  • 16 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Sunshine seeps through
    The facade generously
    Streaming with buoyancy
    Shielding us willfully
    'Til it can bear no more.

    *This stanza was flawless. I love the way you worded this. The alliteration is a nice touch as well. I love the imagery. It's so soft and sweet. This is a very lovely poem and so well written. Beautiful work hun. Nik*

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