LOVE VS. LIFE !

by Amandaa25   Jul 17, 2009


Love is apart of life,
but hearts are still stabbed with a knife.
They take over then pass by;
they wouldnt care unless you die.
You think you found the one,
but after all you wana do is turn and run
he treats you all nice and sweet,
says he loves you till your hearts upbeat.
Once he has you, you dont wana let go
he says he wants to take things slow.
He has you under his spell,
now heres the time when you fell.
Big mistake
another heart break.
As what they do
you live your life feeling blue
just be strong as days go by,
you will meet another guy
but pay close attention
and listen to what they mention.
There will be no hearts to tear,
for once no despair
hes the guy for you,
a start of something new.
Lets hope it works out
cuz soon youll want to shout
those words I love you
this time youll be true.
Love is different from finish to start,
Love is the liquid that bleeds from the Heart.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Blah Blah Blahhhh

    I really like it.
    Alot its very true. and i love the ending its very profound.
    --Tania

  • 14 years ago

    by Sexual hysterias

    Aweh this is really good;
    5/5 I would really appreciate it if you
    would read/comment/rate my new poem "I need you." Thank you! (:

  • 14 years ago

    by Captivat3d

    Wow, I really like this poem because it's so true. I agree with your words and I can really relate. I'm sure everyone has gone through heart break and learned from it. But I wish you made it into a stanza form instead of a big paragraph :/ but other than that, it was great! Keep it up! :]