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by Liz   Jul 17, 2009


SCREECH! gate squeaks
as you close it behind you
then you run across the street
AY! she calls
to catch your attention
as she walks across to meet
BANG! a gunshot
you turn around
as their car accelerates
CRASH! she's hit
and she goes down
your legs begin to shake
THUD! you fall
down on your knees
you tell her she'll be okay
WIIU! an ambulance
her color is fading
you're gonna make them pay
CREEK! the breaks
of the ambulance
they rush to take her there
CLEAR! they shock
her chest jolts up fast
but still she's not awake and aware
Beep-Beep the monitor
doctor says she's fading fast
your eyes tear up and face turns red
Beeeeeeeeeeep.. it sounds
the line goes flat
and you realize she's dead.
ZOOM! you're speeding
back to home
where you pick up your gun
Chak! you load
and track them down
to shoot them one by one
BAM! BAM! BAM! gunfire
you've killed them all
but you're not happy yet
Errk! you drag the chair
standing close to it's edge
and throw the end over the rafters
Tug! you tie it tight
you make the noose and slide it on
to meet your happily never after
ZIP! you drop
the noose tightens up
yet you're still alive
BIP! you pull
with all your weight
and make sure you don't survive

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  • 14 years ago

    by SheenaMarie

    Amazing write...on my favs now...ur very talented 5/5