Hate Me Like I Do

by Lolpez   Jul 25, 2009


Crawling away from light
Denying the spark which ignites
Yet wishing for nothing more
Than a knock on the door
So that I may explode tonight

Don't touch me
Don't love me
Hate me like I do
Just as I despise being alone
Let me dig this grave in solitude.....

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  • 14 years ago

    by HollywoodSmile

    Wow, i was on your profile and this title stuck out to me. I read it, loved it, and went to comment, noticing that i already had. You captured me twice with this one.
    Very nice.

    --HollywoodSmile

  • 14 years ago

    by HollywoodSmile

    I liked this very much, its simple in appearence and format, yet the meaning drives so much deeper. This is a truly...enticing poem. It makes me wonder about my own self-destructive action. Very nice.

    --HollywoodSmile

  • 14 years ago

    by Lolpez

    Thanks---I intend on updating it eventually

  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    I'm glad I ran across this. It was short but it captured me from the start. Left me wanting more and that's the sign of a good poet
    Impressive write