Please no more pain...

by XxLastHopexX   Jul 26, 2009


The tears roll down.
heartbeat racing.
body aching.
I'm spinning out of control.

The pain...
it KILLS.
nauseating.
petrifying.
my soul is shattered to pieces.

I cant take one more death,
nor one more scream,
nor fight,
nor stab to the heart.

They think I'm lying.
Some fictional tale.
the sadness merely a dream.

but one sees
and no one cares
they turn the other cheek
leaving me alone....
with all this hell
leaving me alone...
to die inside.

I need someone to care
to save me.
to understand
Please no more pain...
Please....

I'm
sha-
ttered
bro-
ken
to-
rn
cru-
shed....

Please no more pain....
Please....

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  • 12 years ago

    by Girl of Conviction

    Wow! your writing is just amazing :]]

    i love this one its full of emotion :]

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Hollow Face

    I am amazed. You just took the words right out of my mouth dear. Great job and unique way of writing that just works here.
    5/5
    ~Kitty

  • 14 years ago

    by Blah Blah Blahhhh

    They think I'm lying.
    Some fictional tale.
    the sadness merely a dream.

    love it! its sad how peope just cant seem to believe your goin through real pain sometimes and not somthin your makin up.
    -Tania

  • 14 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow, you just broke a feeling inside me. I felt like i was saying these very same words before. De Javu. Nice work

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    OMG!!! This was soooo good. I love the way you did this. The style like blew my mind hun. I love the way you express yourself in this poem, I can really relate to what you're saying and it's so sad. A very powerful poem indeed. More people need to read this, it's brillant. Nik

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