Rain

by Michaela   Jul 26, 2009


Sometimes I wish I could run
To where I'll never be
I want to scream I want to shout
And no one notice me

Hiding deep inside my soul
Is someone I can't find
Someone that I used to know
The one who holds my pride

I used to lay in bed at night
And listen to the rain
Once I found it comforting
But now I just feel pain

Pain that wasn't meant for me
But hit regardless
Rain doesn't plan where to fall
Its just a hit or miss

I don't know why I was the one
To happen to get hit
I have three other siblings
That the rain chooses to miss

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  • 14 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Sometimes I wish I could run
    To where I'll never be
    I want to scream I want to shout
    And no one notice me
    -- I think in the last line you should add the word 'have' after the and. I think it'd make a little more sense and it'd flow better. :]

    The flow was pretty good overall, I think that's a really important part. You have to make the words roll off the reader's tongue. The rhyming was pretty good, and it's a very relatable poem. I liked it. :]

    Keep writing.
    Cayce

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