The road of destiny

It was an interesting write...It seems like you were frustrated when you wrote this...However look at the brighter side of life..your family and friends, i'm sure you will be able to find and write good things from them...Keep writing..:-)

I like this
Not like anything I have ever read before
It hit home
I liked how you told the roads
I liked how you started and ended this poem.
Our life is based on the life we want
The roads are filled with many twists and
turns there will be plenty of backstabbing
people and plenty of liars.
I don't like people who lie but yet again
everyone does. But I don't like those who
make a living out of lying to others.
The roads are filled with people who rape and murder people who lie and steal.
Yet again there are those who are so passoniate and loving yet have some
of those backstabbing qualities.
Were all humans and the life we live
is short you can die today tomorrow 1 year from now or even 40 years from now.
This just spoke to me halping me to open
my eyes and notice what road I am leading.
5/5
Take Care
-Kortney