Your Volcano

by Ray Smallshaw   Jul 31, 2009


I use to think I was hot stuff,

You took away that arrogance,

With our first kiss,

Now I am your tame Volcano,

Waiting to be ignited by your lips.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Broken Masquerade

    I love this. Short but very powerful in a sweet way :) I love the last part "waiting to be ignited by your lips." Best ending :) The only suggestion I have is maybe change the wording of "hot stuff" to me it just seems a bit tacky compared to the rest of the poem. But that's just me :) Amazing poem in any case :)

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