He is...

by Alyx   Sep 14, 2009


He's slipping,
He's falling,
I can't seem to help,
He's fading,
He's changing,
I can't stop my fears,
He's crying,
He's losing,
I'm failing him now,
I'm crying,
I'm bleeding,
I can't fail him anymore...

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  • 14 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    So sad, I feel the sadness in each word, you can feel as though it was something you actually lived. It's hard to say for a fact as I don't know you, but I feel as though you either had a dream or you are living this now.

    I really hope that everything is alright with you and this is just your way of venting.

    It's a wonderful write, and I really enjoyed it. You're fiance is a very lucky man to have someone so gifted with the way of words.

    Wonderful job.

    Regards,
    Shaun aka Dark Savior.

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