Dying Dreams

by FindingHarmonyInYurCries   Sep 15, 2009


I watched the blood fall
And drop on the floor
With the last of my sight
I checked the lock on the door

Locked as it should be
I continued to bleed
I kissed the tiles
And started to plead

I pleaded to the gods
That I never believed in
That this would be the end
That this time I'd win

I felt something within
Sort of a burning
I liked the thought of being close
My heart too was yearning

If only I could've let go
And forgotten how to feel
Maybe I'd be gone today
And my life could be real

No more fake people
No more fake smiles
I could walk happily
For miles and miles

It's a little dream of mine
You'll see it in my art
The one's on my wrist
With which I'll never part

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  • 14 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    Another great write, you write with so much emotion, its really great. Your ending was especially great, it finished it perfectly. Its a really sad poem, but you wrote it really well. Well done, again. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Hologram

    I don't think yu understand just how much yu mean to me, please please please don't leave me.
    It was a good poem n all but just know I love yu and live, atleast for me, okay ..

    xx

  • 14 years ago

    by Hologram

    I don't think yu understand just how much yu mean to me, please please please don't leave me.
    It was a good poem n all but just know I love yu and live, atleast for me, okay ..

    xx

  • 14 years ago

    by Hologram

    I don't think yu understand just how much yu mean to me, please please please don't leave me.
    It was a good poem n all but just know I love yu and live, atleast for me, okay ..

    xx

  • 14 years ago

    by Hologram

    I don't think yu understand just how much yu mean to me, please please please don't leave me.
    It was a good poem n all but just know I love yu and live, atleast for me, okay ..

    xx

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