Is this a dream

by groovydude   Sep 17, 2009


Standing in the breeze
flowers dancing in the wind
birds singing in unison
is this a dream...

walking through time
feeling the sun on my face
a dog barking in the distance
is this a dream...

the ocean lapping on the shore
seagulls chirping
the sand is soft
is this a dream...

these are the thoughts
carried in my mind
as I walk through time...

this is not a dream

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  • 14 years ago

    by always the same

    Woow its soooo real and open
    amazing
    keep up the great work

  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    A cool poem ! ... I love poems about dreams :) And this one is very captivating. Loved it. It leaves the reader thonking... :) Well done!

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    I think Sylvia & Melody said it all. I cant really add more but that I enjoyed this write. I love poems about reality & dreams. They are always quite interesting...this one wasnt any different. Great work, keep it up.

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Dream or reality, it is a nice way to walk through time. Well done.

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