A Letter of Question

by OYAY   Oct 28, 2009


If I were to look deep into your eyes
What would I see.....
Will i see hurt, pain, railings, and strifes of agony
For on the outside i see beauty
But inside I know you're hurting
Because beauty is just a shade
Or just an emotional curtain
To seek to know the truth
Is what i desire
So can be true to me
So i won't declare myself a liar
I wanna know the truth
Why do you seem mad at the world
Personally I don't see a reason
For madness to approach a girl
It's rude and impolite
And knows not its place
And it corrupts your outward evidence
Starting at the face
Why do u seem so sad
When there's enough happiness to go around
You have no limits or no boundaries
But you choose to nurture the ground
You might be scared to take flight
Because u fear to go too far
But there's no limits or any boundaries
Go pass the radiants stars
Pass the moon pass the sun
Any planet or galaxy
If u don't think there's any hope
You can find it in me
I no your hurt
And i might not understand But I know this for a fact
I'll give u a helping hand
Alight at the end of the tunnel
A rope at the bottomless pit
Because this is the types of girl
I would love to be with
I do love you
Alot above all
And it would kill me
To ever see u fall
So you see these feelings of words
These feelings are gifts to you
Yours truly,
From me..
To you..

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  • 10 years ago

    by LittleMsPink

    D'awe
    that was really beautifully sweet <3

  • 14 years ago

    by Jad

    Well this was certainly a nive write and I would have to say to you in this situation that some people are not willing to just jumb right out of thier boundaries and go with you even with a helping hand and love. As my friend I know alot about you but still whoever this is to remember this well. You will have to gain and persons trust and friendship before they will come and open up to you. And for them being always sad just try to cheer them up it doesn't have to be big or small just a little something here and there and tell them you iwll always ne there for them and help them when they are ready. This is all i have to say. Heed it or not matters to me but that is some of my advice for you.

  • 14 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    A lot of feeling went into this well written poem. Your romantic desire and caring was delivered well

  • 14 years ago

    by Kianna

    Great write!! emotion and caring...love it!!!keep up the good work my friend :P
    [5/5]

    ~KiKi