How lovely this is. A wonderful love poem from you. Well done.

This is exceptionally wonderful. I enjoyed reading it from the start. I love the usage of your words, very inspiring. Well written, 5/5. Em

The inspiration would be Robert Burns?
Very well written, thoughtful and intelligent.

Wonderful!!!

Ingrid, this is beautiful. You have used the terms "thine" and "thee" perfectly, without sounding trite or forced. A wonderful love poem. - And thank you for your words regarding my mother. I appreciate them very much.

A mediveal love poem..short, smooth and
sweet..liked the read!

Indeed, it is a lovely poem. I like the idea of you using old English for piece. It work for me. Your poems never seems to disappoint me and there is always something new from your poems;)

Oh. My. Gosh...
This is absolutly amazing. I'm stunned!

This is the one of the best poems I've ever read, no lie! The imagery! The flow! I don't know what else to say...

5/5! bravo!!!

mandy :)

Ingrid,
What a beautiful poem. It is short but has everything that is needed to get the point across. A very lovely write.

Short but yet so Meaningful...
amazing!

This is just a short wonderful poem. Loved the wording , the feeling of it. You have done a great job Ingrid, glad you are posting again.

Oh my goodness I wish I could write this way! Using thine, and thee, and thou is really hard for me. Its an older way of speaking, but i absolutely love reading it! At least one of us can make some great poetry out of it :)
beautifully written, Loved the title! It really drew me in!
Nice work!
Chelsey

Very heartfelt and beautifully penned.
An enjoyable read.
Paul...

The beat and flow in this was so prominent, although it was simply worded, it penned such beauty. A lovely write, especially since using Old English. Keep up the magnificent work my friend!

~MaryAnne

It has to be published...it's very beautiful.

Simple yet elegant, just a few words to explain so much, very well done. 5/5

Interesting metaphor but makes a lot of sense. Finding the perfect match. Nice work.

Wow...i missed reading your poems..it made me smile too...i'm glad you still have this special touch of yours :)...

This is a lovely poem. This surprises me because I am not normally a fan of the archaic-sounding poems written today. Even though I'm not sure "hand of thee" is correct, this piece doesn't read like it was written today. Its style belongs right in the classical world that doesn't date. I think the secret is that you have achieved a lovely and rhythmic meter that is spot on in this poem. Also, your subject of love here is simple and sweet, which really suits the style and length.

My mother can't sing to save her life, but she always recites poetry to herself as she works. (Good meter is essential for this.) Your poem is exactly the kind of thing she loves and I, in turn, love it too.

I still remember this poem, Ingrid. very elegant and "rosy". You know how to influence the reader passionately :)